
Happy Labor Day! Today I am participating in the Red, White & Blue Makes Purple blogfest, hosted by the fabulous Melanie Schultz.
Here's how this blogfest works:
1. Sign up on the Linky over at Melanie's blog and you receive 1 tally with your name on it (in a hat). Yes, a literal hat.
2. Post a short story of 500 words or less on your site on September 2, 2013, with a military theme, good for 10 tallies.
3. Post about this blogfest/contest on your blog sometime in the next week. - 1 tally
4. On September 2, visit those who have posted stories and leave a comment on their sites- 1 tally
5. On September 2, mention Melanie's blog- 1 tally
All the stories entered will be complied into an anthology and put into an e-book available on Kindle. All proceeds will go to Operation Purple, a great organization that sends children of our military to summer camp, free of charge. And if that's not incentive enough, one randomly chosen entry will win a $50.00 amazon gift card, as well as a signed copy of Melanie's book, The Newstead Project. Win, win, all around if you ask me.
Here's My Entry:
One, two, three. I
count off in my head. Calm
it down. You know what to do. Stop and slow your breathing. Who cares
that you just ran a hundred feet at full tilt with shots fired at you
in every direction? Too stinking bad you ripped every last bit of
skin off your arm sliding into this prone position; none of that
matters. Suck it up Marine!
My
instincts and training snap into place. I focus on my breathing and
go absolutely still. The air around me is hot, stagnant. I’m
sweating profusely, which causes these little grains of rough sand to
stick like glue to every last inch of me. I block out all the chaos
around me until I hear absolutely nothing but the sound of my own
breath. Four, five, six. The pain in my arm, disappears. There are no
more uncomfortable bits of sand sticking to me. I do not feel the
sweat dripping down my back or the blood flowing down my arm.
The intense heat of the desert sun burning my skin dissipates. The
sand fleas jumping around my ears fade to nothing. My pulse slows to
a crawl. Seven, eight. Just
breathe. In and out. I
line up the shot. My spotter has fallen. Don't
think about that. You can't think about that. Block. It. Out. Nothing
matters but this shot. Snipers don't miss.
I close my eyes
and my wife's beautiful face, all lit up with that huge smile of
hers, flashes briefly in my mind. Failure
is not an option.
Nine. I take in a deep breathe.
I squeeze the
trigger. Ten.
Hope you liked my entry. Now I'm off to go check out all the others! Wishing you all a marvelous Labor Day! ~Jaybird
Great story - very evocative - and a fantastic cause.
ReplyDeleteThanks Annalisa! So good to have you back from your break.
DeleteI love it! (Plus, my husband's a sniper.) :)
ReplyDeleteI love the idea behind this hop, too!
I didn't know that! The Husband is too. And I think my girls are well on their way!! LOL
DeleteGreat story, Jaybird! Snipers rock, and Operation Purple sounds awesome.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Ilima!!
DeleteJay- this is fabulous. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for hosting this wonderful blog fest! I'm just glad I could give back in some small way.
DeleteWow, I was transported. Excellent Jaybird.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sheena! I did my best.
DeleteGreat story, very intense.
ReplyDeleteHi Jenn! Thanks a bunch.
DeleteGreat description, I am loving reading all the posts on the hop :)
ReplyDeleteSuzanne @ Suzannes Tribe
Me too! Thanks for stopping in and commenting.
DeleteGreat use of the different senses!
ReplyDeleteHi Li- thanks so much. I appreciate all the feedback!
DeleteExcellent piece! I love the voice of the inner dialogue.
ReplyDeleteThanks Christine! My inner dialogue never shuts up. Between my own crazy thoughts and all the characters that speak in my head, it's a wonder I haven't been committed! LOL
DeleteVery powerful piece, full of emotional turmoil and guts! Loved it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Carolyn- I am so glad you liked it.
DeleteWhat a fantastic idea for a blogfest! I really love your entry. So intense, and full of so many great descriptions, too!
ReplyDeleteAw thanks Heather! You are too kind.
DeleteWhat a great piece! The tension had me holding my breath.
ReplyDeleteHi Cherie! Thank you very much- I'm so glad it worked.
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